Sarah Kay

Friday, April 1, 2011

Metaphor, Simile, Allegory

Your submission  for April 1, 2011 poetry slam needs to include at least on metaphor, simile, or be an allegory.

Poets

  • Diana
  • Candace
  • Daisha
  • Sequoia
  • Zikki
  • Kaynesha
  • Tashaya
  • Yassin
  • Dominic
  • Jose
  • Diana

3 comments:

  1. By :Kaynesha


    ! Pain!


    Pain hurts,
    Pain heals
    Pain stays
    But It Won’t kill

    But, it will stress you out
    Have your hair all falling out

    Nobody will know why you have this pain
    They may ask what’s wrong
    ,but they really don’t care

    Pain hurts but it will heal
    But it won’t kill
    It will stress you out
    Till the day you die

    It’s so bad that when you wake up in the morning
    You can’t get up because you need help…

    Is it love …?
    Than what is it?


    Pain…

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  2. by: kaynesha

    ????Why did you Say????
    Why? Did you say? You cared
    Why are you in my life?
    You make life so hard.
    Why did you turn on us?

    Why did you turn on us?
    Your family

    You said you were happy
    , but with you I’m all stressed out.
    Every day the arguing
    Every day the fighting

    In front of me
    In front of my brother
    In front of my sister
    In front of my family

    If you cared why did you leave us?

    What is your son going to say when he wakes up in the morning, and theirs know one there?

    Every day I wonder if you’re going to come back…
    You hurt me
    My brain is melting
    The sweat running down my back
    Wondering if you’re going to come back

    My brain is beating faster than my heart
    Waiting to hear that knock on the door

    Knock
    Knock
    Knock

    You didn’t say good bye
    You never told me you were leaving

    One day mommies going to go and who am I going to have?
    Who are we going to have?

    “She always tells me it’s almost her time
    For god to come down and tell her place is ready…”

    I always wanted you treat us as if we were your mom and dad and family But you’re gone
    You must not care
    But when its time
    You will be aware …

    Because you left use
    ,and you’re not coming back

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  3. Jose
    He’s awesome, he’s killin it
    He’s blockin those shots
    He’s my brother and I love him a lot
    We fight we brag we go to a lot of places
    “Watch out! You better tie those laces
    He’s awesome, he’s killin it
    He’s blockin those shots
    He’s my brother and I love him alot

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