Sarah Kay

Thursday, April 7, 2011

Show me your poetic skills.

Poetry uses language in many different ways. By noticing the techniques poets use with
language, it becomes easier to understand and talk about a poem. This week, consider
using some of these language techniques to emphasize certain ideas, themes or images.

Diction
Diction is the type of words poets choose to use in their poems. A poem that uses slang
expressions can be just as powerful as a poem that uses a lot of big words. And feel free to mix
up your diction in a poem. There is no reason why you have to use just one.
Formal Diction:
Words that appear a bit more elegant or extravagant. Often formal diction will contain
words that are polysyllabic (many syllables).
Neutral Diction:
Words that appear ordinary and that you hear everyday. Contractions are often used in
poetry that has neutral diction, as well as a simpler vocabulary.
Informal Diction:
Words and phrases that are slang expressions, or the colloquial – the language of
relaxed activities and friendly conversations.

Rhyme
A poem does not have to rhyme. However, rhyme can be an important part of poetry, and there
are many different types of rhyme.
Exact (perfect) rhymes:
Words that rhyme because both the concluding consonant and vowel sounds rhyme.
And while ye may, go
For having lost but one your
You may for ever
“To the Virgins, to Make Much of Time”
Robert Herrick
Example: “Then be not coy, but use your time;marry:prime,tarry
Inexact (near) rhymes:
Words that rhyme because they have similar, not identical, sounds, like
bleak/break and
loud/bird
.
Example: “Between my finger and my thumb
The squat pen rests; sung as a
“Digging”
Seamus Heaney
gun.”
End rhymes:
Words at the ends of lines that rhyme, either exactly or inexactly.
Example: “The massive weight of Uncle’s wedding band
Sits heavily upon Aunt Jennifer’s
“Aunt Jennifer’s Tigers”
--Adrienne Rich

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Internal rhymes:
Words in the beginning or middle of a line that rhyme with each other, either exactly or
inexactly.
  • “And I who gave Kate a blackened eyeible musical scale
Did to its vivid changing colours
Make up an incred
“Whatever Else Poetry is Freedom”
--Irving Layton
Example:

1 comment:

  1. Chained by Candace

    Education my leap
    with feelings so deep
    you look and me and feel
    defeat
    watch me perish
    shot with a million arrows through my heart
    penetration--
    through the soul of a warrior
    I feel like I'm standing in a room
    with ten billion people
    and yelling at the top of my LUNGS!
    and no one looks up
    falling
    down
    a
    hill.

    Blast my soul with hate
    lashed out
    and chained up

    Watch me perish.
    scratch my eyes out
    as I lie bleeding
    in the sky of a billion clouds
    I have third-degree burns
    all over my mind

    Education my leap
    all I want to do is run away
    from the life that I once knew
    follow the clouds
    to a place where
    you
    loved me the first time
    you
    saw me
    where
    I was screaming
    at the top of my LUNGS!
    and
    where you
    were the only one
    who looked up

    Education my leap
    with feelings so deep
    you will take
    one
    good
    look
    at
    ME
    and
    feel
    DEFEAT!

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